Good work. The art style is fantastic and particularly unnerving, and the music was excellent for the piece.
A few criticisms, for a start it was too short, whatever theme it was you were trying to establish [I do hope there is one!] then probe it a little deeper.
I took a stab in the dark and my guess is it was about the decline of modern society into obesity and the objectification of women, which can of course be seen all around us [thus the short walk] and the end, well its either a referance to suicide or the end of civilization.
Quite creepy but most seemed to have missed the point, so probe deeper good sirs!
It was great, your cartoons always seem to create there own little world thats as funny as it is twisted. Keep creating them.
[PS: I like your music aswell]
Well Thought Out
Its not a particularly new topic, that is how mundane one's life can be, but this flash presents it so well and although its light hearted, I think it has some good meaning behind it.
We all wanted porn...
We didn't get it, thus the humour.
I'm giving you a ten here not because of your flash, but because of your mesage and your purpose. It was really quite touching and I really am sorry that your friend passed away. And phoenix, I hope you can find solace in your post when someone close to you dies so tragically.
I don't think some people realise that the author is obviously taking the piss. I mean its obvious the graphics are crap, but thats the humour and I love your voice, wording and everything, tis brilliant. You're not the childish side of Dave Firth in disguise are you [since you're hosted on fat-pie]. Anyway keep it up, they're fantastic.
And great talent with your drawings and animations, but it just isn't funny, you need to kind of be a bit more rude and well funny. Its a brilliant song and you've got a great voice, just mess about with the lyrics and add some blood.
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